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Pixel Chibi Finn by HayaMika Pixel Chibi Finn by HayaMika
I've been wanting to try to make my own Animated Doll of some sort. This is my first try at making an animated doll like this, so any critique will really help!

Finn the Human; Adventure Time (c) Pendleton Ward
Art by me; =HayaMika
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Amazing! Really good job and well done for pixel chibi :)
I love the colors you did on them and the shading is so well done I love it and am amazed of the wonderful art you made. I see a bunch of Adventure Time Fanart but this one is by the farthest the most unique and my favorite! I love the movement you did on it, my favorite thing about it are the colors and the way it all turned out I love it I just absolutely love it! Consider me a fan of your artwork :) Good job just good job 4.5/5 you could have done a bit bitter with the posture like his shoulders but hey i cant do any better so good job :)
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The pixel art itself is really nice, I love the colours even though the mirror shading on the feet and legs looks strange. It makes it appear as if there is a light between his feet.

One thing I HIGHLY dislike is the animation... but this is not your fault alone. I am against these bobby motions because there is no real animation to them. all that you (and many others) have done is selected the top two thirds of the picture and dropped it two pixels or so. It deforms the legs, don't even really bend at the knee and thus gives a distorted yet not very cute look. When animating. Try to really animate something. Start small.
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Scarlettku Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2013
Shocked :squee: so cute finn is
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swagstiel Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
i'd write a cirtuque but i dont have a lot to say. i really like ur line art!!! it's really nice and clean!!! the colouring is kinda weird i dont really like the colours u chose for shading. and so is the movment it jsut messes up the anatomy?? u coulda made his whole body move up and down that wouldve been nicer uwu
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HayaMika Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2013  Student Filmographer
Yeah... I'm still a beginner and I have a lot to work on. Thanks for your critique, every small bit helps~ >w<
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swagstiel Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
yeah!! ur welc!! thansk for not going like 'wow that was so mean omg DX nyeh!!1!!' like some people on this website
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HayaMika Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2013  Student Filmographer
I used to be like that but I learned that when you ask for criticism, you take it, no matter I it's bad or good.

I'm very thankful for the criticism I got on this. It helps me with learning new things to do and try on future works. >w<
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AudeGift Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2013
:3 Cute
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IchiUchi Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
YAYOMFG FINN!! :iconadventuretimeplz:
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HeatPhoenix Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013
There is no consistent lightsource, you should work on your anatomy and contrary to popular deviantArt believe, moving something 2 pixels up and down is not proper animation. Don't fall for overly sweet critique, if you're going to want to improve you should probably get a more serious crowd than deviantArt, try pixeljoint or pixelation.
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HayaMika Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Student Filmographer
I'm aware of the animation thing. ouo And my style is very off of anatomy naturally, so its supposed to look like that.

Thank you for the suggestions! I will check them out and try to get more help there. >w<
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HeatPhoenix Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013
Are you sure that's a style? You shouldn't make concessions in your art because it feels comfortable. I really do like the eyes by the way.
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HayaMika Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Student Filmographer
I dont get what you mean by concessions. Do you mind explaining?

And Thank You~
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HeatPhoenix Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013
Well, I don't understand why you would use this style that in my opinion doesn't look very good when you can do much MUCH better (I've looked at your gallery).

Also, you've been extremely graceful in taking my critique, so I think I should thank you for that (since most people really don't, especially on dA)!
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HayaMika Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Student Filmographer
Its supposed to be chibi style, but I guess I have no argument for it seeing as I do draw chibis with proper anatomy sometimes. I'll just have to remember to look at it before I begin to color and make proper adjustments if needed. >u<

And your welcome. I used to be very rude about people critiquing my stuff before, but I've learned to handle it with a bit more maturity since a lot of the time the things people were telling me did help me in the end. But I'm guessing not many people realize that.
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HeatPhoenix Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013
Something to remember at all times is "feedback is a gift"! There's always more stuff to learn.
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HayaMika Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Student Filmographer
I agree.

Again, Thank You for the critique! I will try to work on some of the things you told me~ >w<
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DangerFlow Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Student Digital Artist
I really lerv the colouring. o:
Those eyes are amazing.
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HayaMika Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Student Filmographer
Thank You~
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DangerFlow Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Yhur welcome. c:
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auglice Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Hobbyist
awwwww so cute
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HayaMika Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Student Filmographer
Thanks~

(Is that slenderman?)
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auglice Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Hobbyist
ur welcome (yes it is slendy)
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HayaMika Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Student Filmographer
(Slendyyyy Yep. I officially love your icon.)
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auglice Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Hobbyist
(thank you for loveing it haha)
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